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Evidence of gaining feedback from an audience

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- Add definition to the letters with a bold line through the letters

- Colour match title to flowers in title scene

- No I liked the colour, but I might add definition to the letters with a bold line through the letters

- I like it 

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- The over exposed clips 

- add in a clip at 0:49 so the jumping is more realistic 

- I like all of it 

- No

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- 'Smurf' like with a high pitched voice

- Gruff and Yorkshire

- gremlin like 

- A little high pitched yet not too high

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- yes

- no 

- I love the picnic blanket and tiny food so much

- Yes! I love how they're on a little adventure

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- A close up of tansy's face at the end

- stop motion as their is a lack of movement 

- More scenes including Tansy 

- No

Evaluation

Due to my feedback I have decided to film some more clips including: Tansy interacting with nature and a clip of tansy moving, if I have time I may also do a small stop motion scene. I also changed my title colours so that it is more visible. I did get feedback that this work was to slow-paced but I did this purposefully as I wanted to depict a calming nature walk, Tansy is admiring the nature, it is not meant to be energetic or action packed.

I think my strengths include the varying shots and different angles I use to film aesthetically pleasing scenes, as well as the variety of panning and still shots I filmed. I think the story line and character I created worked well to gain attention as some people gave me verbal feedback to tell me they found the product sweet and memorable. 

I think my weaknesses for this project include the quality of my shots, as some scenes are out of focus, by improving the quality of my shots I could retain the attention of my viewers for longer. And the repetitiveness of my clips as the content I could film was limited, by filming with different shot types and subjects I could gain more interest form the viewer. 

To improve this idea in future I would include stop motion scenes to make my character tansy appear more like an alive fantasy creature, I would also film in different environments such as snowy and muddy setting, to make the end product picnic that this character is on a journey to achieve, feel more satisfyingly accomplished. 

Due to my feedback I added in a close up clip of my character, that links to the picnic scene as they are drinking the tea shown in the last scene.

I also altered the colour of my title by using the colour picker tool in the inspector window

I added in a clip of my character falling s that the movements of my shots made more sense.

I added another clip of  Tansy 

Final edit
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